Before anything I just wanna say that I find it incredibly funny that you had that idea in mind, since I had something very similar in mind lol. But it's very interesting to see how you have a very different approach in comparison to me.
I really liked both songs but especially the 2nd one was very nice in my opinion, because it has that amazing transition, which really lets you imagine a bizarre world in which all of your imaginations can become reality, good and bad. And because the first piece doesn't have any drums the drop really gives feeling of moving forward and progression into the deeper layers.
Overall very nice Songs, keep it up!