Okay so I think you have some interesting and original ideas but does not know exactly how to express them. I think composition wise main thing is, there is no motion in any of your songs, you need your melody to move, your chords to move. Look up how to voice your chords, triads in the low spectrum sounds pretty rough. Sullied dreams the whole mix felt like you put a low pass on it, there is no high end at all you can probalby look into that. The composition of this track has some great ideas but once again the executions is a little rough. You can probably stick to a toanlity at first and see what works in terms of music theory and play with that. Hope this helps :)