As your second project it's actually pretty cute. I think the fact that you're still learning made this OST pretty much avangarde, which is not bad. Well, mixing is a bit messy, but hey I started with practicly no mixing heh, you'll get that soon. I really like those kinda j-pop guitars in Uoyetahi. If you'll work on it a bit, it actually sounds like Omori! But at the same time I think sections with these like sudden bursts of anger need to have a bit more structure. You can just like punch your midi or keyboard to have chaotic sections, but they need a bit more structure. I personally do this sorts of sections in a like of for example Caravan Palace, thier songs have those a bit chaotic eclectic sound to them. Also Druck is actually epic. Even tho quality is a bit messy, one day maybe you will become Bo En or will work on a Fangame ^^ I'll be waiting for a remaster