The first track is an absolute solid start and it’s very nice, quite nostalgically reminiscent of a vintage kids computer game.
The first seconds of Life Attacks with that organ got me hyped but the arrangement and the quality of the instrumentation doesn’t do justice to the extremely good composition you tried to go for: the guitars sound like drills flattening and burying everything, so I suggest to deal them back a little, EQ them and try different guitar sounds for the most intense parts.
I Remember, instead, while it sounds a little too sparse for my tastes, it certainly has a tender childlike vibe that neatly wraps up the story.
With more polishing work this project could become way more better, keep up!