Interesting take with rock, first submission i've heard with that yet. I think you got some nice ideas but for the composition there is some small inconsistencies like some chords and melody are crashing from time to time together. I think Sky Rush is your best so far, I would take off the piano notes at the end it felt out of place with the rest of the track. Also in terms of mix, your guitars bass and melody sound fine but the drums is weak compared to the rest, it can clearly be more compress and in your face. Anyway hope this helps, good job :)
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Thank you for the feedback. Its my first jam and first time writing in this style. So the feedback definitely helps. I do recognize the points you make. In terms of the drums there's already pretty heavy compression on them, but especially the toms, snare and kick could be more in your face. I have some ideas on how to fix that, so will try that out to see if i can improve it.
I'll keep this in mind for my future writing!