I jumped into this one because of the image, and I'm not ashamed or regretful.
Not knowing the vagaries of the musical style, I actually really like this. I'm a bit sad you didn't submit more, as the story of a Miko deserves a kind of time and place to more understand their hopes and fears, anxieties, and such.
However, the strict cadence, variety of instruments I'd expect in a folk ensemble - it's there, and I like it.
Good job!