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"June's Theme" meloncholy and wistful, nice articulation on the piano.

Listening to "Wake Up June" on my headphones at times sounded a bit harsh at the higher end of the pitch (not an issue with headphones removed).

"Morning Shrine Visit" nice use of the motiff from June's Theme towards the end. Song has a nice, gentle feel to it.

"June Goes To School" a nice tune reminiscent of  "Wake Up June".

"The Beach", like the trills and swells. Nice staccato melody. Horns are beautful as they come in.
The drum rhythm in "The Festival" has a nice groove. Crowd noises provide an immersive ambience.

"June Lost Her Mom" uses dissonance in the strings to create tension well. Piano melody has a very nice impact and I like that you stopped the brass rhythm during it to provide it space.

"June's Mom is Sick" is very legato and dramatic. I like the somber brass melody.

Nice variation on the "June's Theme" motiff at the start and end of "An Almost Answered Prayer". The deep piano has a powerful impact and the electronic instruments provide a nice groove.

As for "Inside My Mind". Oh hey, the "June's Theme" motiff again! Good guitar and vocal performance. Really enjoyed the transition to rock.

Most in depth comment yet. Thanks for putting so much thought into the feedback. The track that was harsh in the piano part is totally true. I just listened back and it’s because of the piano library. I’ve been having quite a bit of trouble with that Steinway sound on tracks and i think there is some clipping on some of the notes in the actual library itself. Frustrating but I’ve been able to troubleshoot that after your comment so thanks for that. 

I really appreciate all the kind words and the main things you pointed out were the main qualities u wanted to stand out for each track. I think we have similar ears.

Thanks again.