I love how you have taken so many staples from Toby Fox's style (strong catchy motifs, fun repeated supporting lines, similar samples, some melodic ideas) and made it completely your own, I could totally feel the influence but this felt so special as its own project! I read along with the song descriptions you put and I think you did a very good job and telling that story through the music as well, It was really fun to listen to!! My only feedback is see if you can mess around with how you approach some of those more repeated background ideas like that strings line in THIS IS MY WORLD, you have so much development going on in everything else and not taking the chance to let that line develop more almost feels like a missed opportunity, because your ideas are so cool!! I don't have this problem as much in songs like Stay Courageous because the simplicity is what makes that song special for me, its just deciding how and when to use that repetition fully to your advantage, because it builds tension and drives us forward, but sometimes you need to release that tension and give us some new content to have that real breakthrough moment.
Really happy to listen to this one early in my day today because it has me very excited to hear more, incredible job!