HOLY SHIT. This has so much going for it. The piano melodies, the atmospheric strings, the effects created by the overlapping wind parts, and the really simple chromatic elements of that main melody add so much to it. The weird watery synthesized sound effects make the setting feel really alive; though they could probably be mixed a little better if you're planning on continuing this project. Sometimes the way they're done feels like someone's breathing into my ears or directly brushing the microphone. Sometimes that effect really works in the music's favor though, and it could be what you're going for? Either way this is amaaaaaaazing