Amazingly touching work and 10 times more amazing taking into account that this is your first orchestration!
The emotions you are showing in your music fit the picture perfectly.
You composed a very beautiful melody. I also like the storytelling, how the music becomes more dramatic and impactful by the middle of the track, how it evolves all the time and makes us feel different emotions. Also impressed by the thorough approach to elaborating the game story.
Just a Wow, great job :) looking forward to your next works :)