The writing style is very beautiful! You can definitely feel the influence of games like "ABZU" or Thomas Newman. For the story and artwork, the music is absolutely fitting. I read that you initially did everything in Finale: but the libraries aren’t from Finale, right? The woodwinds and piano sound very good, though the strings might be a bit too mid-heavy. I would have played a bit more with the dynamics if I may, although I'm not sure if the effect you achieved was intentional, as this type of mix could work really well in a platformer game, in my opinion. Overall, great job!