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A jam submission

Umi's Dream OSTView project page

Composed and submitted for OST Composing Jam #7
Submitted by JacobMotlMedia (@JacobMotlMedia) — 9 hours, 34 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Correlation to theme#224.2684.268
Composition#1363.8213.821
Overall#1933.6393.639
Impression#3183.3213.321
Quality#3373.4113.411
Creativity#3673.3753.375

Ranked from 56 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • I very much enjoy the instrumental choices in this particular track-- the penny whistle in particular was I think a very nice choice. There is clear effort to write to the theme of the competition, and within that scope I thought you had a nice variety of musical ideas that covered a good gamut of emotions. "Bubble Reef" personally stood out to me as the strongest composition of the lot-- it is at once beautiful and effervescent, and as mentioned earlier, the penny whistle absolutely shines here. Fantastic. The production overall I think could use a bit more balancing. The string samples tend to overwhelm your very nice woodwind writing at times, which is a shame, as a lot of those lines struggle to speak when they could otherwise shine! It is particularly noticeable on long held chords or notes in the strings, which goes to another suggestion which would be to use the framework of chords that you've developed here to create string lines that are a bit more like independent lines and less block-like, which would go a long way to solving this problem well before it gets into Reaper to be mixed. Another suggestion would be to be more aggressive about expressive tempo changes. I can clearly hear that you have a good musical sensibility, so try to imbue that not only into the note/harmony choices but also into the MIDI "performance" and you can get a lot more emotional resonance out of even stock MIDI sounds. I felt there were several sections that were begging for a rubato instead of the tyranny of the SMPTE click! :) The piano writing throughout also impressed me. I would love to hear some of that performed with live musicians as I think the subtleties of a human performance would add a lot of depth to your writing here. A beautiful submission and one that I think made some really smart choices, only really being held back by some minor production issues-- the addressing of which I think could really elevate this musical gem.

Description
Umi's Dream is an instrumental soundtrack with an added synthesizer. The imagined game of the same name is imagined to be a side-scrolling platformer with a focus on exploration and narrative.

Umi is a young girl, named for the ocean. Her late mother, a marine scientist, drowned during an expedition when Umi was a baby. Though Umi has no waking memories of her late mother, the two are united every night when Umi dreams.

One night, Umi drifts to sleep and dreams as always - but this time her mother is missing.

1) Umi’s Dream is the titular track for the game, featuring both Umi’s Theme and Mother’s Theme. It would be played on the game’s start screen.
2) Mother’s Absence is for an imagined cutscene at the very beginning of the game, when Umi fades into her next dream only to find that her mother is absent. The narrative idea then leads into the gameplay. Featured in this track are variations of Umi’s Theme, Mother’s Theme, and the first instance of the Ocean Theme.
3) Blue Dream is the track for the first level. As Umi begins to search for her mother, she is plunged into a vast and strange sea where she can breathe underwater. A variation of the Ocean Theme is the most prominent melody in Blue Dream, broken by another variant of Umi’s Theme.
4) Bubble Reef is a relatively energetic track for another level, in which Umi comes to a lively reef teeming with coral and schools of hand-drawn fish. In this imagined level, Umi has a lead on her mother’s whereabouts. Variations of all three themes - Ocean, Umi’s, and Mother’s - are present in Bubble Reef.
5) Umi and Her Mother is the track for the final cutscene of the game, in which Umi and her mother are reunited. Variations of Umi’s Theme and Mother’s Theme are present.

To create this OST, I first created the narrative idea of the game: the subject matter, the characters, the conflict, the genre of the game, etc. Once I had the game idea, I began by composing three themes: one for Umi, one for her Mother, and a third for the Ocean - where a bulk of the game would take place within Umi's dream setting.

With the themes written, I decided on the instrumentation and began sketching each track. Once each was sketched, I orchestrated the sketches into a full score. The notation entry was completed entirely in Finale. I then exported the MIDI tracks and imported them into Reaper, where I edited, rendered, and mixed the stems. Once the master track was rendered, I used Audacity for a final compression and spliced the tracks into their individual lengths and exported each as the final product.

The total runtime for Umi's Dream is 10:38.

Inspirations referenced include: Claude Debussy (Reverie, Cathedrale Engloutie), Spiritfarer, Abzu, Pikmin 4, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Finding Nemo.

Theme

Inside my world
Picture theme

How does it fit the theme?
Umi's Dream is related to "inside my world" in two major ways. First, the imagined game takes place entirely within one of Umi's dreams - in her head, her psyche, her own subconscious. Second, the narrative is about something greatly personal to Umi, which is her mother's death and how Umi mourns a mother she never knew in life.

Regarding the picture theme, Umi's Dream capitalizes on the nautical elements (the fish and the bubbles), the surrealism, the girl in pink and the joy on her face, and the bubble silhouette of the woman next to the girl.

In Umi's Dream, Umi is the girl in pink. Umi's Theme is composed to be spritely and childlike yet versatile to capture Umi's emotional journey. The bubble silhouette is thought to be Umi's mother, whose theme is composed to be tender and nurturing. Finally, the dream itself is represented by the Ocean Theme, which breaks away from the style of the other two themes in being more pad-like to represent the vastness of the ocean and the dream taking place.

The whole of the soundtrack leans into a "nautical" or seafaring sound (penny whistle, piano textures, string textures) combined with moments of ambient dream-like sounds and textures (melodies and pads on synth).

Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://jacobmotl.bandcamp.com/album/umis-dream

Number of tracks
5

Genre

Orchestral
Ambient

Soundtrack use permission

No

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Submitted(+1)

Blue Dream is very pretty.. those synths! is that a bass clarinet in the middle? Its sound blends really well with the dreamy chords in the background! Nice work :)

Developer

Thank you for listening! Yes, I used a bass clarinet in the ensemble.

Submitted(+1)

Heh... this soundtrack made me smile. He is very colorful!

Developer

I'm happy it made you smile! Thank you for listening.

Submitted(+1)

Beautiful composition! Nice chords and melodies. You also chose a very beautiful set of instruments for this soundtrack.

As was mentioned elsewhere, some effects like reverb could be used to add a sense of depth and dynamics to the soundtrack, although things sounded nice as they were.

Bonus points for putting in the time to write a story/description to go with this! Great job.

Developer

Thank you for listening and giving your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Submitted(+1)

Love the chords and harmonies in the middle of track 5 - Umi and Her Mother. Very cool submission!

Developer

Thank you for listening! I appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

Really enjoyed both the soundtrack and the story. I really liked Bubble Reef, it's a nice small mood change

Developer

I'm glad you enjoyed the soundtrack and its story! Bubble Reef took a lot of effort to compose, so it's nice to know that it leaves an impression

Submitted(+1)

Very nice.

Developer

Thank you for listening!

Submitted(+1)

The ethereal and dreamy feeling throughout the track is immaculate, I like the use of strings that is mostly present in the soundtrack. My favorite track in the album was "bubble reef", the bouncy feeling with the piano and the strings that combined makes this a wonderful song

Developer

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Bubble Reef - it's the track I'm most proud to have made :)

Submitted(+1)

The music makes people feel very peaceful, with a sense of freshness and hope. It's wonderful.

Developer

Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

The narrative/story you have for this game is fantastic! I think each track works perfectly and fits well with your game's narrative. Your composition skills are great and your use of motifs is commendable. Also that penny whistle (or at least that's what I think it was) in "Bubble Reef" was lovely to listen to. I feel like you could further elevate its sound with a little reverb, although this could just be my personal preferences speaking. This is a great soundtrack backed by a really intriguing story. Very very nice entry!

Developer

Thank you for taking the time to listen and give feedback!

Submitted(+1)

A lovely listen! My favorite track was "Umi and Her Mother", very interesting harmonically.

My main suggestion is more movement. The soundtrack tends to get a little static at times as most of the accompaniment is block chords. You do a good job at arpeggiating the piano part, would've loved to hear more of it.

Great work!

Developer

Thank you for the feedback!

Submitted(+1)

beautiful soundtrack! i love your interpretation of the theme! i do also like your dominant use of piano throughout each song. truly ethereal.

my only thing is that your instruments sound a little robotic for an orchestral soundtrack. i would add much more dynamic contrast and humanize the instruments a bit more. your writing is great, and with those small additions it can easily bring your music to the next level!

nice work, beautiful soundtrack! can't wait to hear more from you in the next jam!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for listening and taking the time to give feedback!

Submitted(+1)

PEAKMIN 4 MENTIONED!!

Developer

I love Pikmin!

Submitted(+1)

Nice story, great sound palette. There are lack of humanization (soul) in piano and automatisation in strings section. But melodies and compositions are great! Nice work!

Submitted(+1)

Nice research about the lore and narration in the music! Interesting musical ideas!

I had a lot of pleasure listening to your submissions :D

Submitted(+1)

I like the lore where you're connected to somebody only through dreams, and one person being deceased can make a powerful plot line. The music's top-notch and is perfect as ambient. Doesn't pop out too much in your face but still has character. One of the more professional entries 4sure.

Submitted(+1)

Nice storywriting in the songs!  Pretty good string arrangement too, pretty cohesive between all the tracks.  Good job!

Submitted(+1)

Very professional production on these, you used the strings really masterfully! The simple yet gorgeous textures you achieve throughout are really impressive. I especially liked the second track, I think you definitely achieved that feeling of loss that would accompany Umi as she finds her mother absent from that section, while still keeping that childlike wonder. Really evocative overall, great work!

Submitted(+1)

Its clear you put a lot of thought into making the music match the game/story. Everything is really well written and reflects the story well. Good job!

Submitted(+1)

The composition is beautiful and it suits the theme well. Good job!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

The writing style is very beautiful! You can definitely feel the influence of games like "ABZU" or Thomas Newman. For the story and artwork, the music is absolutely fitting. I read that you initially did everything in Finale: but the libraries aren’t from Finale, right? The woodwinds and piano sound very good, though the strings might be a bit too mid-heavy. I would have played a bit more with the dynamics if I may, although I'm not sure if the effect you achieved was intentional, as this type of mix could work really well in a platformer game, in my opinion. Overall, great job!

Developer(+1)

The libraries are a combination of Musio and Kontakt Factory. Thank you for listening and taking the time to give feedback!

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