Truth be told, I don't really like the redesign. I tired to give it time, and look at it with fresh eyes. I looked for minor details that I may like, and I can't find a reason to like it.
What bothers me the most would be her eyes. I noticed while looking for details, that she has little flower patterns in her eyes. I really don't like that along with her new thicker eyelashes. Honestly, there is too much details compared to the rest of her design that it is distracting and doesn't fit her character.
Her outfit also bothers me. I liked the open hoodie, with the uniform underneath, but this new one does not look good. The hoodie is has no zipper and seems to cover the uniform, except for the bowtie for some reason? Like did she tie the bowtie, put on the hoodie, then pulled out the bowtie to show it off? Why? Also, it seems like the hoodie is a short sleeve hoodie with some sort of clips on the end that seems to have no use. Why is it short sleeved as well? It just looks wrong, especially with its front pocket so high up. Why does it go al the way up to her bust?
Speaking of bust, it just doesn't look right. They look padded or that she is wearing a pushup bra. There is no natural sag. Looking at the Patreon post, they look look to be slightly larger than in the old design, but as a comment below has said, they look too big for her.
Speaking of the side by side Patreon images. The new design is too shiny. I get that she is supposed to look more "angelic" but that was accomplished by lightening her hair color. The extra shine on her skin is too much and can hurt the eyes to look at.
I can see a lot of work has gone into the redesign, and it is very well made. But some of the decisions I feel like are a step back than a step forward. I do love your game, and I want to see it get even better, so I am sorry if my critics sounded harsh. I only want to make the game to be better.