Additionally
As I was writing my first comment out, I took a look at the Patreon images. Which caused me to change an earlier paragraph and add a new one. I just wanted to add that I noticed the bowtie is actually the strings of the hoodie. I believed the design above would be her normal school outfit she normally has. So I was very confused why it did not resemble the school outfit at all.
As I was looking at the Patreon images, I did actually find a new detail about her that I liked. Her painted nails. It adds to her character quite a bit. Though it makes the details of the flowers in her eyes worse. It makes it redundant to have flowers in both her eyes and nails.
Also, looking at the side by side. I do like the decision to keep her hair as being slightly messy.