I liked aspects of it but it often felt a bit empty. I think the various instruments in the 3 sections coming together at the end would make for a great climax.
Hmm, interesting... what do you mean by 'empty'? Were there certain parts in particular where that struck you? I know that's why I added synth at the beginning, because the piano sounded like it was echoing into a void. I'd love to hear more of your thoughts! Thanks so much for the feedback :)