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Great submission! The art and music are very clean and consistent. It was too difficult for me to visualize what the maze looked like by playing only a few minutes, but I guess that is the point. I like the alchemy interpretation but I think your concept is lacking a bit on the shadows side (I also didn't find that in your GDD). That is unfortunate, because I think you could have incorporated that easily within this concept. I really liked the changing backgrounds when changing perspective, that helped a bit with understanding what was going on. One point of feedback:
The icons for the "powers" were not meaningful enough for me.


Nice work!

Oh, and I would also link your GDD in the description of your game page. Just in case the reviewers don't want to press a button that says "download" :)

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Thank you! :) To be honest I had difficulties myself getting to the exit and I designed the map hahah.  The icons are supposed to be an abstract representation of a coordinate system but I think since the map is already quite difficult I should have made the icons more clear. Yes you are right I kinda forgot about the shadows part, I think I misunderstood the theme initially and thought you had to choose one or the other. Maybe I still have some time to make some changes... Thank you for playing the game and the feedback, I really appreciate it :) 

Thanks for the feedback on the GDD as well, I added a Link now as well :)