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(By the way, thank you for your responses.)

I am only pointing this out for you to work in your thread onwards anyway, but I did also find a few spelling errors spread throughout the visual novel; and if I were to make a safe bet, you might want to check Deoxys' fail state for any more as well (42's not working, even IN one of the example texts).

I would not remember to even give a vague pinpoint on where they are because I was binging through it as much as I wanted to see before the day yet comes where I would become busy again on other things while I have been reading too much, so sorry I cannot be much help from there.

Brpdchainsaw104 days ago

What exactly do you mean by "42's not working"?

I saw in your translation that you put question marks by a lot of the double numbers too

SketchHusk103 days ago

Yeah, that last part.

I am just wondering what was the process that was done where you got Deoxys' texts to which some double numbers fails, if not two certain number combinations always failing to follow one of the instructions provided that I even marked all that did within the document.

I just thought you may eventually caught up to that admittedly out-of-place use of words. I apologize.

Brpdchainsaw103 days ago(+1)

Okay, looking at the ones you marked, I think I see the confusion

So if Deoxys text has a 42 in it, like the one you marked here
(4?)2Qw8t e12jk1m88es5f5o xjm9m2 dg u7vt48srk.

You'd ignore the 4 since the 2 immediatly overwrites it.

When I'm writing dialogue for Deoxys, I use a random number roller that I programmed to decide what numbers she uses and how long until the next number shows up
So it'll pick 1-9 then 0-4, if the second roll is a 0 then that's how I get two numbers showing up in a row, sometimes it's two valid numbers, somtimes they're both ignored, it's all up to chance

SketchHusk102 days ago (2 edits)

Well, that sounds a bit more convoluted, but it is not fatal; one can still figure out for themselves like I did as it is simple in design such as the four numbers to work with despite it being seemingly overwhelming at a glance.

I appreciate you taking the time to be thorough.

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