The story-arch is so well crafted here, and Main Menu theme in particular has lovely ideas and colours utilised. That is great pacing and structure to these compositions and the writing is excellent. Being hyper-critical here (as you asked :) - keep working on the programming of lyrical and legato lines, as in places you could add a bit more realism through more dynamic shaping and phrasing, as this will just add another level to your tracks. Also explore ways of adding more intensity to the battle-themed sections. Overall this is has been very impressive to listen to, great work :)