Hey great game. If I had to point out the good and bad things about it:
1. firstly the intro was really cool (you know to see you putting effort into makin a smol story and making a comic despite not having a lot of time)
2. another good point was the level design and use of mechanics which was pretty clever
3. a down point for me was the music ... as much as i like 8-bit music and the sound, the option to turn it off might be a good addition
4. another down point for me ... i'm sorry to say but it was the art (in-game) for some reason it didn't do it for me.
but overall awesome game