Hey man, cool track! I really enjoyed the composition and your choice of sounds - apart from maybe the strummed acoustic guitar tone (its a little harsh maybe? quite subjective tho and I guess comes from a guitar player who is into more mellow stuff). I found it kinda funny to read in your miro notes that you are just starting to learn mixing - same here, I submitted to the OST Comp Jam #7 (let's hope for the results soon, your track there was great!), and I also noticed some mixing issues (especially volume) for my submission and tried working a little on that.
Until we meet again in the next jam perhaps? :D
Edit: What is that bass sound? I think it is pretty cool. Something like Trilian Ac 1 it says in your notes.
It's in the miro, you got the list of the VST used by the composers of the game. It's Trillian!
Thanks for the nice words. I actually tamed A CRAPTON the brightness of the guitar, but I couldn't find something a bit more full and round, so had to go with it. It's also highly dependant of listening conditions. In a mobile of some crappy headphones I have around, it's super bright, in my nice Beyerdynamics DT 1990 PRO it sounds perfectly fine. Still got tons to learn on mixing ahahaha .
And yes until we meet again <3