Oh, man I was so ready to be blown away by a superpiece composed in just 3 hours, but it turned out my EARDRUMS were blown away by the BASS DRUM at 0:08. Your track is credible and it might work fine if you put more time on it (but of course you knew that already). Sounds were decent enough and the melody is interesting with its "up and down the hill" nature, but as the loop is very short it can get a bit repetitive at the end because we hear it quite often with no bridge or part B. So, not bad for being made in 3 hours after all! I just implore you to turn those drums down, for the sake of our sanity...