This is pretty good, like the call and response very much, albeit it becomes a bit repetitive by the end, but that can be not a bad thing for a background track. I wish there were a bit more times with less instruments to add some breathing room in the track.
It's a shame you didn't have more time though specially on the mixing part, all the instruments sound overly dry and super bright, it's quite aggressive and I know what I'm talking about, I spent a week trying to tame my guitar's brightness with no success x_x
Overall good job, just needs more time to cook!