I really like the vibe and it has potential, but it needs a lot more work.
For one, I've tried the web version and the resolution you set for that one is really low. Text gets cut off and overall it feels like looking at the world through a really small window. So, please increase it. Another thing, the camera felt really 'floaty'. Next is the dialogue and lack of direction. So, the game starts and you are told that you gotta talk to Jill. So you go to Jill , talk to her, she just says 'Hey honey!' and that's all, you can't talk to her further. I think she's supposed to say more, but something bugged out?
Anyway, I didn't know what to do after, so I went to the elevator and... after what seemed to be a cutscene, I was suddenly in some nondescript black void while alarm sounds were blaring, I could wander around, but there didn't seem to be anywhere in particular to go to? I thought I had to wait for something but even after a few minutes nothing as happening, so I just quit.