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This is a creative idea! I like how the prototype looks--the shadows have a charming visual style to them. The story of mixing potions to affect these shadows to try to help them is pretty interesting! Of course this isn't a full game right now, but it's an interesting idea. The speech bubble is a good way of interacting with the shadows so that's another good thing to keep, and recoloring the shadows after applying an effect on them is good too. Only other feedback I have is that there are some grammar and spelling mistakes, which is a bit noticeable when there's a lot of text in the game.

Good job on the prototype!

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Thanks a lot for your feedback! :'D

I didnt proofread it much and since english isnt my first language my proofreading probably didnt help that much either :D

I will let some people proofread it too and correct the Texts in the upcoming updates :3