Very cool concept! The writing is good and shows a lot of promise for the choose-your-own-adventure type experience. The nightmare level as planned in the GDD is quite creative and is intriguing as a mechanic and plot device. I must admit, I find myself rather curious as to the source of the player’s nightmares and sleep disturbances for the people of the town. There’s a lot here that I find compelling; I could see myself playing through a completed version of this multiple times to see how the story develops based on differing choices. I look forward to seeing more of what you create in the future!