I loved the story and use of theme! I thought the mood and mechanics to work with the world building were all great. The platforming itself was a little bit frustrating, I think mostly because the camera was so far zoomed out, that it was difficult to see the player character and my positioning on the platforms. Maybe if the camera was zoomed in, and moved around with the player, that would help with this!
Overall, nice work, I especially like the background art!
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