Wow, amazing artworks (it reminded me of the TRPG "BESM" - big eyes, small mounth) and audio. Indeed interesting idea is in the story. There are just few typos like "in frInt of his house" instead "...frOnt...", "definietly spleeping" is correct English? I would use "definitively". Why te "QT", does it mean something? Oh, I think that I got it, QT is to be pronounced as cute, right?:) The descriptions are not well separated from the direct speeches. "She will smaller" - "be" is missing there. "...continue(hopefully..." - strike spacebar!;)
Anyway, this game got me :). I am looking forward the whole (even paid) version!:) But.. Because there was nothing to do (just clicking on the text window to move on), I am giving just 1 / 5 for fun. All the rest ratings from me are 5 / 5. Note that I consider the theme of the game as OUTSIDE IN and not as inside out as was requested by the jam giver. But as an amazingly tolerant person, I rated 5 / 5 the theme too. (You are lucky that my life Partner is not in this jam, because he is not that tolerant like me).
Feel free to try, rate and comment the game which I submitted - made by my life Partner (not just a boyfriend, got it?:)).