I like the layout alot, you nailed the theme pretty well... I think a few sentences about how to run an adventure after how the characters meet up would help solidify the setting a bit and give the GM some direction...
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Thanks for the kind words, and I appreciate you taking the time to look it over! My hope was that the copy on the front of the tri-fold would offer a suggestion for kicking things off, but I can see a GM looking for additional guidance on nudging players toward a starting point. I wonder if I could include some copy in the Meet-Up section. These one-page games are such a fun challenge for balancing efficiency and clarity!