I like the layout alot, you nailed the theme pretty well... I think a few sentences about how to run an adventure after how the characters meet up would help solidify the setting a bit and give the GM some direction...
Thanks for the kind words, and I appreciate you taking the time to look it over! My hope was that the copy on the front of the tri-fold would offer a suggestion for kicking things off, but I can see a GM looking for additional guidance on nudging players toward a starting point. I wonder if I could include some copy in the Meet-Up section. These one-page games are such a fun challenge for balancing efficiency and clarity!
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Excellent work here! The game looks great and it's absolutely dripping with tone and atmosphere. You really crushed this. Congratulations!
Thank you so much for taking the time to check it out, and I really appreciate the kind words!
I like the layout alot, you nailed the theme pretty well... I think a few sentences about how to run an adventure after how the characters meet up would help solidify the setting a bit and give the GM some direction...
Thanks for the kind words, and I appreciate you taking the time to look it over! My hope was that the copy on the front of the tri-fold would offer a suggestion for kicking things off, but I can see a GM looking for additional guidance on nudging players toward a starting point. I wonder if I could include some copy in the Meet-Up section. These one-page games are such a fun challenge for balancing efficiency and clarity!
Love the use of the PUSH SRD system with the addition of the judgement track. Really nice design!
Thanks so much, EP! Your one-page RPG guide was a huge help and how I heard about the PUSH SRD!
That's great! Glad it helped!