I think the art for this game is really nice, the music choice suits it pretty well, and the decision to do a visual novel for this game jam is unique given that I've yet to come across any other visual novels on here. Unlike a lot of other visual novels, however, there was basically zero interaction on the part of the player. No decisions to be made, no alternate or branching paths, nothing. It just whittles down to watching things happen. A lot of the writing is also really awkward, mainly when the game is trying to describe a character doing a certain action or having a certain facial expression, mostly because there was no visual indicator or break or anything like that. This made it look like the character was talking rather than striking a pose in-game or whatever. The game also didn't delve into the theme much: When it starts to, it just abruptly ends with a message stating, "Thanks for playing, hope you enjoyed, yadda yadda". Overall, there's a few aspects I really enjoyed, but it could have been better. 6/10.