Very good work!
I think my main feedback is that it gets a little chaotic in that you sort of lose the tempo just a little at the beginning and in some of the sections.
But the overall work and scoring is absolutely fantastic. Wonderful job!
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It's like the tempo is fine, but in the mix the rhythm gets a little lost, like the chaotic effect could be refined to maintain musicality. I mainly say this too because it sounds like the type of chaotic you're going for isn't avant garde, and it's more of a cinematic type of chaos, although sometimes those two overlap just a bit.