This is very evocative and paints a vivid picture of traversing sand dunes while attempting to escape fate- well done! I would have liked an end state, something being worked towards but ither then that small gripe this this is gold, looking forward to playing it...
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Thanks for the feedback! I agree, I feel like there should be an end goal. Initially when I wrote this I felt that thematically it didn’t make sense to have an end goal because the drifts have wiped your memory and I left it open ended for you to fulfil your own goal.
I may update the rules at some point to finesse it a bit.