It has come to my attention that there are too many grammar errors in my entry. I'm extremely sorry for this. It's unusual for me, but it looks like... The writing didn't go as planned, ahahaha. Anyway, beware the grammar.
Don't beat yourself up too much, it's not that bad and is still easy enough to read through! I guarantee my work has a lot more grammatical errors than yours. It was a great little story, and you had a snappy prose that kept up the pace. Great work!
