English is also a secondary language for you like it is for me? Anyway, I was not playing being an English teacher, but I was just ejoying your smart story. In Discord, I quoted to what I reacted "LOL+WOW". I forgot to set my story to Public, which I just repaired - thank you for hinting me.
By the way, I am from the country, which is producing the best beer on this planet (but I am an abstinent, so I do not know that from my own experiences). What about if I will offer you, that i will send you the best beer(s) in exchange of your proofreading of my text(s)?!:)