A solid read! I dont see much Space Elves literature, and with their recent release, I look forwards to reading more. I very much enjoyed the story, and the characterization of the elves. Too often I think Elves are written in the Tolkien style (which is great, dont get me wrong), where every single elf moves with unearthly grace and looks down their nose at everything.
Its refreshing to see you choose to write them as people, and I dig that. Pacing was solid, characterization was good, and you did a good enough job setting the scene that even a newbie to the faction could follow along. Good stuff!