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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #10 | 3.840 | 3.840 |
Overall | #11 | 3.747 | 3.747 |
Adherence to Theme | #13 | 3.560 | 3.560 |
Concepts & Originality | #18 | 3.840 | 3.840 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This really has "OP tower wizard doing OP tower wizard things" vibes, I love it. A flashy and gritty psychic battle that's easy to read and stays loyal to theme, good work
Really enjoyed this, it was well written and flowed nicely. I like how it didn't go according to plan for either party, that was a nice touch.
A great read! Interesting concept that starts strong and flows well. The ending felt slightly rushed to me, but that's kinda to be expected with a 1000 word limit.
To echo Last Omnitech's comment, it was great to read some space elves, they never get enough love! It kind of leaves you wanting more (in the best way), could be expanded into a longer story, or a series of stories.
A solid read! I dont see much Space Elves literature, and with their recent release, I look forwards to reading more. I very much enjoyed the story, and the characterization of the elves. Too often I think Elves are written in the Tolkien style (which is great, dont get me wrong), where every single elf moves with unearthly grace and looks down their nose at everything.
Its refreshing to see you choose to write them as people, and I dig that. Pacing was solid, characterization was good, and you did a good enough job setting the scene that even a newbie to the faction could follow along. Good stuff!