I liked the overall style and atmosphere.
I wonder if the following suggestion could be helpful to you: maybe you could have added some animations to the main character that would suit well the world, nothing super-complex, maybe a like a subtle swivel left and right, as if a child held the character? I think too much stiffness took me out of it.
But I liked the general shadowing looks and the feeling, as well as the VO, which not many jam games usually have.