That hurt to play, didn't expect this.
As others have mentioned, the dialog is a bit on-the-nose at some points, but I think some of it works well already. But what really stands out to me is everything else that slowly changes, the scale of objects, your walking speed, your character model, the to do list... It really gets the point across.
I hope making this game wasn't such a bad experience for you, glad you made it :)