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Not only does this game freeze every other dialogue, but you REALLY make people sit through 30 minutes of the most boring, unimaginative, autistic, and insufferable dialogue known to man before anything remotely interesting happens.


Also, why does the PC have to be such an out of touch jackass on top of being a rapist? This is dogshit.


edit: Do yourself a favor and get rid of whoever is writing this story/dialogue. It's written by someone who has never even touched another human being in an intimate way (and probably never will).

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Yo bro its a visual noval and you did not  make the game and you cant change it so if you dont like it dont play it, instead of commenting your bullshit

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It's called criticism and anyone afraid of it should stay off the internet, chump. Mind your own business.

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I would go as far to say your feedback isn't helpful to anyone smothered with insults the way yours is. Adjusting the way you talk to people will be very helpful if your intent is to have people take your criticisms seriously.

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It's criticism, take it or leave it at your own peril.

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Its not criticism if all you are doing is telling them to fire someone over it.  You could have just been a normal person and said i don't know "The game lags at times, MC comes off to strong, the pacing feels to slow".

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someone got a small pipi and is angry....

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Texts have speeds and settings. Adjust them to your liking.

The main character is written to be unlikeable, the entire game is about him being tortured for his past horrible acts, if he was likable it wouldn't work. You know like a anti-hero. It might be time to broaden your fictional pallet.

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My "fictional pallet" is extensive and this "dialogue" is bad and, to put it quite concisely and quite bluntly, reads like it was written by a 15 year old that thinks the clitoris and the vagina are the same thing. If you're going to do something so apparently nuanced as -whatever this trash is- then get someone who actually knows how to convey this message instead of writing DarkRP grade smut.

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Bro you act like you can do better 

just because you cant pallet the story doesn't mean it's bad it's because your dumb you gen Alpha brain rot mother fucker.

I think the story is great It has it's flaws but makes sense and I tip my hat to the creator. 

Keep doing what your doing Kinky Fridays