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The main image on page 1 is not anchored to the page, this throws it off and it looks weird.

The table on Page 4 needs to have it's text "Word-wrap". half of every sentence is cut off. 

The image on page 6 needs to anchor to page with the wrap set to Page wrap. 

Page 7 "WRANGER CLASS" is covering up the text that should be shown in the columns.

Again on page 7, the table is completely cut off beings of the two column format. 

Also, on page 7 it literally says "CLASS TITLE" as a palceholder. this should be removed. 

This needs a serious second draft and a proof reader. 

Once these things are addressed, it should be saved as a PDF and uploaded.  .docx files are unprofessional. AND if you are using any special fonts, we don't see them when we open the .docx file. BUT, if you save it as a PDF we will see it.

All of these concerns have been addressed with the most recent update.

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Thank you very much for your feedback. I am not used to working in Word. so I am a novice at formatting, but I think your advice has helped me improve slightly :).

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That is so much better! Thank you! : )