This was enjoyable to play. I chuckled at the one ending, so I'm going to follow and see where this game goes.
Only criticism I had was the text may be too hard to read. On the other hand, I think there's a charm in the way the text cuts off at the end of the textbox. It really suits the artstyle.
Otherwise, it was a good spooky experience: interesting story, good selection of music, and pretty decent for a first submission.