Very interesting vibe and story! I like the artstyle and have 2 pieces of feedback for this game.
It got a bit frustrating to start over from the beginning every time I did something wrong however long I had gotten in the game, it would be nice to have some checkpoints or just being able to just retry the particular choice you failed on.
The second thing was that it would be nice if the dialogue didn't move on to the next as soon as I clicked but maybe finished the text in the first click and then moved on on a second click. As I wanted to read the text faster but couldn't as I had to wait on it to not miss anything.
I think you got a cool story and vibe going and I hope you will expand on this! Great work! :D