I wasn’t expecting a VN for some reason. The genre’s not so much my cup of tea, but I enjoyed what you put together once I realized what it was. The writing is amusing and fits the premise surprisingly well, and there’s forgiveness for making stupid (funny) choices, which makes playing through even better. The art is well done and the liquorice theme is fun!
You might want some kind of note about strong language. I found it to usually detract from the humour, but that might just be me. I’m not sure what the typical audience is for the lospec jam/itch.io crowd.