Thank you so much for playing the demo and thank you for the feedback, The game is still in its early stages and all the feedback will help me in building the final release.
The smoothness feature on the camera can be turned off, in fact I think it would be good to add a camera smoothness option in the menu so the player can decide what they like.
Yes, that's a great idea for when you read the journal, I will look at changing this.
The game controller uses a raycast and also a reach tool, the distance on both can be easily changed.
If I removed all loading screens you would have a really long load time after the main menu, the player would have to wait for for the full game to load all objects, scripts, animations everything, I feel its best to have short loading times in-between each scene and there's going to be lots of scenes in this game.
Thanks again for playing the demo and for the feedback I really appreciate it, best of luck with your demo too I will be following your progress :)