Some quality stuff as I see. Very atmospheric vibes! Graphics are cool, writing is great. Very polished.
From feedback perspective:
- don't like when you can't skip text appear animation, I read faster than it's appering so it gets annoying
- type numbers using mouse to do some basic stuff like asking backgrounds can be tedious and not fun. Allow typing using keyboard could help but I just don't get why to have those mechanics in the first place. Like, contact list would work almost the same. Or if you called someone, it should be saved somewhere no allow not to type this number again.
- also, I would not allow to make a virdict without being sure what player got all the clues he needs to get the right answer. If speak about "optimize the fun" player can just start new game and try to DDOS the right anwser by doing verdicts again and again. I know what it's against the fun, but you know... Players sometime optimize the playthrought in non-fun ways.
Great entry! Enjoyed the game. Didn't figure out who was "Storm" on my first try :)