Spotted an error for you.
New Convo with Rosalyn in the Deep Woods:
‘The words begin to come out, almost suspiciously well, as yo utry to express what you feel.’
Should be: ‘as you try to express what you feel.’
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Another error?
Convo with Siofra, Affection 6:
‘Siofra scoffs, but grudgingly smiles. Either she knows that you know, or she has taken that as a complement meaning that you think she is actually that strong, and at this point you are not really sure you want to know which it is.’
From the context of this paragraph I think you mean ‘compliment’ (A polite expression of praise or admiration) rather than ‘complement’ (1. A thing that contributes extra features to something else in such a way as to improve or emphasize its quality or 2. A number or quantity of something, especially that required to make a group complete).