Yours looks like it's a longer game to me so I have skipped rating it for now and might want to see if I have some point where I have more time to play it before rating it.
The intro music sounds pretty cool, looks like from the credits it's original music, and it sounds really awesome.
One problem I noticed already is that the red text on the left is hard to see, I almost thought the game wasn't working at all and could barely see the start button, but then I saw it and could click it.
It's not game breaking so it shouldn't be changed during the jam, but it's something I noticed and if you were to continue working on this game after the jam, that might be a good place to start.
Playing through the beginning quickly it already looks really interesting so I might want to see if I could play it at some point when I have more time.
If it's a type of game that has multiple endings I might want to try to get at least 1 before rating, or at least try to see if I could play this game for as long as I can before rating it.
So far it looks pretty interesting though, nice job!