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"To secured the scene." Should be secure? Page 2 introduction.
"The brotherhood is trying to tunnel into the cellar from a Beighboring property" Should be Neighboring? Page 3 rumors.
"Strange flying Jewled bugs" Should be Jeweled Bugs? Page 3 rumors.
"Have moved in to secure the sight of the explosion" Should be Site? Page 3 Factions.
"The townsfolk know excatly what everyone is doing" Should be Exactly? Page 3 Factions.
"Jeweled" and "Waiting spelled incorrectly, page 8.
I like your alchemist generator. Best of luck.