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Critical feedback as requested :

0:00 - 0:30 : Good start with the gong some pads and doublebass and or cello. Although way too much reverb especially on the doublebass, its easily getting muddy you'll have to cut some low frequency on the reverb itself and tone down the wet signal. You also starts a standard chord progressions going to the dominant early. For me going to a dominant chords mean I want to do a resolution back "home" but this early and its also the only time you are using the chord that is clear does not place me in the mood of whats going on you are doing it couple more times later on but its not noticeable enough imo, I would've continue to go modal for a while before incorporating the chord.

0:35 - 1:14 - There is a lot happening here , doing triads arp on the low registrer with the doublebass/cello is not the best idea in terms of frequencies plus the reverb adding on now you get the real mud and make no space for other instruments which means I can hear that lots of stuff is happening but i'm also missing almost everything. You can try to space your voicing instead of doing closed up triads arp that will help in one way

1:14 - 2:15 : We can finally breathe in the frequency spetrum but you basically just moved everything from low end to mid range so we still have the same issue its just less packed.

2:15 - 3:00 : Same as 0:35 - 1:14 , Lots going on, missing some info because its not clear enough

3:00 to end : Thats a great idea with the tremolo pad you have some cool sound design but its all cut from high frequencies, I think the mid-range pad is very nice and all the sound design in the background should be way higher in frequencies it will make the track breathe so much more.

All in all, you got a good mood and ideas, you track just need some space to put all the ideas so we can fully hear everything clearly.