Honestly, I think the idea does have some promise, but there's not too much variety with the gameplay and it felt like I was just moving around and clicking on buttons to do things. Moving around also doesn't feel that intuitive or clear, especially since a lot of the art for the rooms are placeholders, and I was initially unsure about how the minimap worked since the arrow was pointing in the opposite direction.
The web/Twine game also doesn't seem to work properly on the itch page, but I was able to get through some of it by opening it in a new tab. I think it's more interesting than the regular game, but it doesn't seem to be quite finished. I think with some more time, it can be developed into something interesting.